『Louminers』
Chapter ONE
"♪Jut the way you.." "Oh, that is not the right note. It is more high when you start the ' Just '. "
Mrs. More scolded Jain pointing at the score that she was holding.
" Okay, I will try..♪Because your amazing, Just the way you are~ " Jain tried again.
" Yes, that's the correct note. " She smiled. " Now you will be in the gole no time! "
" But Mrs. More.. I don't know where I will start. If I have to be in my gole, I have to start something. " Jain said looking down.
" My dear..The start line is your self. And your effert! You have to put your soul in your music.. " Mrs. More said. But Jain just looked at her with eyes that saying ' I understand but.. '. Mrs. More thought for amoment. Then suddenly her ex-pression brightened. " How about going in to the Luminer! That is your high school's musical groop! " " What? But I am.. " " No matter you are good or bad.., I think it is perfect for your startline. " She said smiling at Jain.
(Few days later)
" This was the last class with me guys. Now you guys are 18years old! It is last grade so be good and bye, I love you! " Jane's class teacher said with a sad smile. But Jane didn't care. Because the teacher didn't do good to her. And when the class is over she were going to have audition to be at the Louminer.
" Now goodbye, Kids! " The teacher shouted as the school bell anounced the last day of school.
" Finally.. " Jane said and picked up her bag. " Now.. The just way you are is my audition music. "
She said and entered the music room.
There was a young woman who was waiting for Jane.
" You are the girl who wanted to try the audition.. Jane I suppose, Right? " The woman smiled. " My name is Marie Johnson. Nice to meet you. " Marie was very merry.
" Nice to meet you too...But how did you know my name? " Jane asked surprised alittle.
" Your bag. " Marie said simply. " Now your propose music is Just the way you are? " She asked
" Yes, May start now? " Jane asked.
" You may~ " Marie replied.
Jane sang putting her every soul in it. She closed her eyes for a moment as she sang the song.
Her own world speen around in her mind. She smiled.She was very happy. She was happy when she sing
When she finished, she opened her eyes. She was surprised when Marie was standing up, clapping and grinning.
" It was fantastic..I could see your music! Wonderful! Perfect!" Marie clapped and smiled.
( The Next day )
" Oh, Jane! I am so happy for you! You are in the Louminers now! " Mrs. Frost, Jane's mother squild.
" Mom..? Is that true? Wow..!! Really! Oh..! " Jane shouted happily stop drawing her comic.
" Yes! " The mother and the daughter hugged each other for awhile
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