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This story is by 5th grade classroom.

Hello, Jimmy. This is Mrs. Flora. I suppose you're feeling nervous about being the first to write this story. I understand. Starting a story is very important, because the rest of the story depends on how good you wrote the start. However, this story is written for the cooperation of 5th grade. Nowadays, not many children is in our school. As you know, there are only 7 kids plus you in 5th grade, Seaside Elementary. So I want everyone in my classroom to feel as a group by writing a story together. Wish you good luck! P.S. please leave a comment area where you're classmates can write their feelings about your story.

Okay, Mrs. Flora is right. I can do it! I'll start the story from now.

Long, long ago, there lived a brave king with four, beautiful daughters. One of the daughter's name was Flora, and she was known for her beauty, knowledge, and kindness. She was divinely beautiful, dazzlingly clever, and angelically good. 

  All over the world, many prince came to the castle to propose to princess Flora. They always brought fancyful things to buy Flora's father, king Boston's favor. However, nobody ever managed to marry Flora because her father had given all the prince who asked to marry Flora a tough and difficult test. Nobody ever came back live if they took the test. They only returned, dead. But dispite the risky test, many prince still arrived to take the test, and soon on, there was only three prince left:

  Prince Jiteye, a brave and a youthly fellow who's son of the powerful king, king neelow. 

  Prince Booky, an intelligent and a romentic man who's son of the brainy king, king knowle.

  Prince shado, a mysterious and a quiet prince who's son of the kind king, king givinger

  Now that only these three prince were left, the attention began to focus on the three kingdoms. Many people said prince Jiteye will be the one to marry princess Flora because he was brave and powerful enough to pass the test. Other people supported prince Booky because he was intelligent to be the one to pass the test. 

  Only a small amount of people said prince shado will be the one to marry princess Flora because nobody knew how he will do at the day. 

  Time passed, and finally, the king announced to the three kingdoms to send their prince to take the test. 

COMMENTS:

*Good! I like it. Fairytales are so interesting! You did a great job!

*Oh, so Jimmy, you like prince and princess stories? O.o Just kidding. 

*Fun, but need a little bit amendment. Why is the princess's name FLORA, just like Mrs. Flora? Also, this can't be real. How could a person be divinely beautiful, dazzlingly clever, and angelically good at the same time? If there's a person such, I'd like to meet one. So let's just change it to ONLY divinely beautiful, okay?

*Dude. You really write this? Many actions scenes, please.

*I like it, but why does that Booky fellow sound like me? Wish just a coincidence.

*I wish prince Shado will marry  princess Flora. He's so...Mysterious! >.< Or prince Booky, who's so...romentic...Ha...I don't like prince Jiteye. Strong people aren't my favor. 

*Great job Jimmy! You're great! Now, the next turn is Arena! Please write until next Tuesday^^