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<첫번째 일기>
나는 책을 읽었다.
I reada book - I read a book.
책이름은 해리포터이다.
Its name is Harry Potter. - It's name is Harry Potter.
그것은 인기있는 책이다.
It is popular book - It is a popular book.
이 책은 J.K.Rowling에 의해 쓰여졌다.
The book was written by J.K.Rowling. - This book was written by J.K.Rowling.
그녀는 이책으로 유명해졌다.
She was famous for this book - She become famous with this book.
이책은 흥미로웠고 아주 재미있었다.
The book was interesting and It was very fun. - I found this book was interesting and I enjoyed it very much.
그래서 나는 많은 어린이들이 이 책을 좋아하는거라고 생각했다.
So I think that many children like the Harry Potter.
- I thought that was the reason why many children like that book.
내가 읽은 책 중에 아주 흥미로운 소설이었다.
This is the most interesting novel that I have ever read. - Very good. : 한가지 - 소설이었다 This was
<2번째 일기>
나는 친구의 집에 갔었다.
I went to my friend house. - Good : I went to my friend's house.
나는 친구를 만났을때 너무너무 기뻤다.
When I meet my friend I was happy. - Good : When I met my friend, I was very happy.
우리는 서로 오랫동안 보지 못했다.
We were very pleased to see each other after a long separation. : Good
We haven't seen for a long time.
우리는 점심을 먹고 컴퓨터 게임을 했다.
We had lunch and We played computer games.
We had a lunch and played computer games.
20분후, 우리는 시내에 쇼핑하러 갔다.
Twenty minute later, We went shopping to downtown. : Good
About twenty minutes later, we went to shopping to downtown.
나는 머리핀과 나의 친구 생일 선물을 사로 먹을것도 샀다.
I bought a hair pins, my friend birthday present and something to eat.
I bought a hair pin which is my friend's birthday present and something to eat.
좋은 시간이었다.
I had a good time. - Very good.
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